My first design! Inspired by a mural in a pizza place

wow that sure catches your eye :D i like it but it seems kind of big for me :) great job on your first design!!


help me out too? :) [this is also my first design]
Real vampires don't sparkle

another skull design..how unoriginal.

Wow. They said it was their first design, and you bite like that? Secondly, I like it, it's a little big for me too on the shirt, work on placement a bit. So what it's another skull - people make that many of them because people love them. Skulls are like rock and roll these days...You can't do anything totally original, but you can show a new side to something old.

Keep it up, put it on a couple of other colors too and I think you'll get more responses for nit-picky critiques on how to make it better rather than overall crankiness.

Keep in mind, the colors you've chosen remind me A LOT of Day of the Dead - and you may want to change them or tweak just a bit to stay away from that because there are so many souvenirs on that, so if you're gonna stick with the day of the dead vibe, maybe attribute the inspiration to that holiday rather than to a "mural in a pizza place." :]

Keep it up, with some more revisions and more work you'll have something. Also - kudos for choosing to have your first design critiqued rather than submitting :]

I agree, too big, and placement today is off center most of the time when it is an iconic (compact) design. I do think it is beautiful. Good job