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crownclothinggroup
crownclothinggroup aka Eric Todd is a 24.87 year old boy, has been a member since August 14, 2009, has scored 13 submissions, giving an average score of 4.69, helping 0 designs get printed.
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First Kiss Feed Back Please
hey could anyone give me some feed back on a design in progress. its called First Kiss. thanks!!

tracerbullet
   tracerbullet on Aug 24 '09 at 3:02pm
it was a little sloppy. a bit too much tongue. kinda wet.



be gentler next time.
Torakamikaze
   Torakamikaze on Aug 24 '09 at 3:03pm
I don't get it :/
crownclothinggroup
crownclothinggroup on Aug 24 '09 at 3:08pm
you don't get the design or his comment?
crownclothinggroup
crownclothinggroup on Aug 24 '09 at 3:09pm
www.threadless.com/critique/51465/First_Kiss
Torakamikaze
   Torakamikaze on Aug 24 '09 at 3:09pm
the design.



i always get brian's comments.



they speak to me.
emilymmkay
emilymmkay on Aug 24 '09 at 3:10pm
she looks like she's standing backwards
crownclothinggroup
crownclothinggroup on Aug 24 '09 at 3:20pm
well..its about having your first kiss..the guy on the left is melting from his first kiss, i don't know how much i can explain it...but yeah she does look that way, but this is a work in progress i was just a lil anxious to get it up
crownclothinggroup
crownclothinggroup on Aug 24 '09 at 3:21pm
**how much more i can explain it**
Torakamikaze
   Torakamikaze on Aug 24 '09 at 3:22pm
why the bag heads?
emilymmkay
emilymmkay on Aug 24 '09 at 3:24pm
I wouldn't want my first kiss with a bag on my head ;(
crownclothinggroup
crownclothinggroup on Aug 24 '09 at 3:29pm
everybody has a first kiss even ppl with bags over their heads
crownclothinggroup
crownclothinggroup on Aug 24 '09 at 3:32pm
but the bags are for the ppl who think they're ugly and can't find love
Torakamikaze
   Torakamikaze on Aug 24 '09 at 3:34pm
like that one movie about the girl who jumped off diving boards on a horse until she went blind?
courtney pie
courtney pie on Aug 24 '09 at 3:41pm
I saw that once. I think I cried about the horse.
Torakamikaze
   Torakamikaze on Aug 24 '09 at 3:43pm
tracerbullet
   tracerbullet on Aug 24 '09 at 3:43pm
The Horse Swimmer
spacesick 2
spacesick 2 on Aug 24 '09 at 3:44pm
Burn Notice

on USA

Characters Welcome.
crownclothinggroup
crownclothinggroup on Aug 24 '09 at 3:45pm
...umm haven't seen that movie, but everyone finds love that helps you get the point of the tee
Torakamikaze
   Torakamikaze on Aug 24 '09 at 3:46pm
you're missing out



bitch goes blind
courtney pie
courtney pie on Aug 24 '09 at 3:51pm
and she's way cuter than she is now
crownclothinggroup
crownclothinggroup on Aug 24 '09 at 4:01pm
i'm sure its very touching
crownclothinggroup
crownclothinggroup on Aug 24 '09 at 4:05pm
but does anyone like the idea. Its not completely finished they're is still stuff i'm goin to add like legs and feet.
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Wad up fellas and ladies, i'm an inspiring fashion designer looking for a good start. Um like to design everything from tee's to tailored blazers. My inspiration comes from every and anything. I mean it could be as simple as a commercial on the discovery channel or a widget on my macbook. I'm currently in school studying fashion design and this site seemed perfect for me to make some cash and still keep my mind sharp. Alright thats about it. Hope everyone likes my stuff.