aubade
noun:
A song or poem greeting the dawn; also, a composition suggestive of morning.

added more detail, the stuff in the background is from the design, so those are some details you can see. anddd, i added more clouds and the 8 colors I used are at the top. I added more details to the tires, too. I had had more than what's shown but I didn't like it, it looked weird.
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Simply Lovely design!! $5

i really like this! maybe a little more goin on with the trees (partial foliage or a birds nest or something?)

great idea!

hub caps

yeah .... hub caps... like the tree roof though

as i stated in my description, i had had more detail on the tires and it looked weird so i took it off. aka - I had hubcaps and it looked bad, so they're not there now. If I don't get it this time, I'm not re-submitting it. So telling me things to improve on isn't doing anything, sorry.

Try putting your stuff up for critique. Sometimes you can be too close to a design to see anything that should be improved.

I've done all the improvements the people told me previously, and some I thought would do it some justice. and if they aren't on here it's because they looked bad, or I couldn't do it because of the colors, or whatever, so even if I put it up as a critique, I'm going to get the same reviews, and unless I want to re-do my whole design [which I don't] that won't really help me either. But thanks for the advice.

Love it would buy at least 25. I think it is great!

simple, cute, and i love me some volkswagen vans.

5$

Somebody doesn't seem to really take constructive criticism. There's probably a way to do the tires, because right now it detracts from the rest of the design - which is VERY nice.

I'm just not so welcoming to it since I've heard every single one of those criticisms before, and I've attempted to fix those things and I can't do it with the colors I have, I'd have to change the colors of everything and take out even more detail, so I'm willing to sacrifice the detail on the tires for the detail on the rest of it. I had much more detail, in fact, until I realized we could only have 8 colors, then I had to cut back A LOT. So sorry if I seem rude or ungrateful it's just I've tried to do those things and people keep bashing me about it.

i still like it even if the tires are plain.

how cool! my sister used to live in a minibus that had a tree growing in it.

This is a very lovely design, but has no chance of being printed, because VW are total hardasses about trademark:

VW Trademark Policy

....but you still deserve the '5' I'm giving you.

d van is nice! +voted

http://www.threadless.com/submission/176472/Haircut

Nice illustration style, would be cool as to have some hub caps. Some cool icon or something related to the design maybe?

Very hippie :)

Really cute.

lose the clouds

Hotta go with everyone else--the tires just look funny without hubcaps. They also look too squared off--try making them more rounded on the sides.
The rest of the design looks nice, though.