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I'd get rid of those lame circles on both sides of the candy bar, they aren't really adding anything to the shirt and look out of place. Do that, and you might have something here.
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The text is how it should be, shouting out at the viewer although in a subliminal surreal mood. That catches the eye and holds it there. Good work!
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Surreal text.....delicious colour........wonderful. And yeah...dripping chocolate would be great as well.
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Hmm, the circles eh? Just thought of making the chocolate bar stand out, with some sort of a funky background. Thought it would be a little too simple with only the chocolate bar.
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Yup, circles be gone! Not a message I'd wear, but a very artistic and accomplished route to take a cheesy pun and I salute you for that.
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@FRICKINAWESOME: Thank you very much for your VOTE and comment! Appreciated!! Hmm..thought the circles would make it look a little funky, but thanks again for your opinion!
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Hmm. Atleast someone likes the circles! Common, they're not that bad..dunno why people dislike them. But glad atleast the candy bar's come out well!
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About my design
Notice that the letters of 'BITE' are made of peanuts..which we all love in a chocolate bar!
This idea of 'Wearing An Attitude', in a way represents the cocky-young-smart-chocolate boy with the entire idea being completely conveyed by this simple illustration.
8 colours have been used.
So go ahead, you cocky designer! Rate it or BITE ME! :)
Vote if you like, and comments are always welcome!
Thanks!!